Sunday, September 11, 2011

An Experiment in Synonyms

Synonyms are so important when writing. It can get annoying to read the same word over and over and over and over and over and over (have I made my point yet?) and over again in the same sentence or paragraph or even the same page or chapter. Some words are so unique that if I see them more than once in a book, I'm going to notice. One thing I always try to pay attention to when I'm editing—whether I’m editing my book or someone else's—is word usage. Everyone has certain words they use all the time, and once I pinpoint overuse of those words, I try to suggest synonyms for some.

One way or another, my husband and I got on the subject of various words used for laughter. Hubby had some very particular thoughts about what came to mind when he heard each one, so we thought it might be interesting to write down his thoughts vs. the dictionary's definition.

Here's what we ended up with.


Cackle
Hubby's first thought upon reading the word:
A witch's laugh.

Definition from Merriam-Webster:
1: to make the sharp broken noise or cry characteristic of a hen especially after laying
2: to laugh especially in a harsh or sharp manner
3: chatter



Chortle
Hubby's first thought upon reading the word:
Somebody choking and laughing at the same time, where things are coming out of your nose. (Like when you laugh milk out of your nose.)

Definition from Merriam-Webster:
1: to sing or chant exultantly
2: to laugh or chuckle especially in satisfaction or exultation


Chuckle
Hubby's first thought upon reading the word:
Forcing laughter out.

Definition from Merriam-Webster:
1: to laugh inwardly or quietly
2: to make a continuous gentle sound resembling suppressed mirth


Giggle
Hubby's first thought upon reading the word:
A high-pitched girly sound. Kind of like a horse neighing.

Definition from Merriam-Webster:
to laugh with repeated short catches of the breath


Guffaw
Hubby's first thought upon reading the word:
"Isn't that the guy on Aladdin?"

Definition from Merriam-Webster:
a loud or boisterous burst of laughter


Snicker
Hubby's first thought upon reading the word:
A nice candy bar or a giggle for boys.

Definition from Merriam-Webster:
to laugh in a covert or partly suppressed manner; titter


Snigger
Hubby's first thought upon reading the word: "Don't call me that!" Also, making fun of somebody, laughing behind their backs.

Definition from Merriam-Webster:
snicker


Titter
Hubby's first thought upon reading the word: To almost fall off of a cliff; right at the edge of falling.

Definition from Merriam-Webster:
to laugh in a nervous, affected, or partly suppressed manner; giggle; snicker


Here are some words that mean "laugh" that I'd never heard of before: cachinnate, boff (boff as a noun means "hearty laughter," whereas boff as a verb means "to have sexual intercourse with", so if for some reason you ever use this to mean laughing, be careful about context ;)), horselaugh.

Every time I think I've found words I use too much, I always end up finding more every time I edit. Do you try to pay attention to your particular "catch words" when you write? Are you still trying to pinpoint yours? I find words so much fun. :D

7 comments:

  1. I looooooove synonyms. When I'm writing, I almost always have Merriam Webster Online Thesaurus open in a tab. And then I do like you did: read the dictionary definition and compare it to my own perceived connotation. :)

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  2. Great list there, Laura. And I especially like that you included what they meant to your husband. People in real life laugh or smile a lot, so my thesaurus is my new best friend. :) But you're right about using a word that's too unusual. Best save those for once a book because they stand out too much.

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  3. My favourite thing about synonyms is that every time I am tempted to use one, I hear "You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means" in my head, and then I am cautious. :)

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  4. Um, that anonymous comment was me. Not sure what happened.

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  5. that is guffawcklious!
    hmm. i should be careful making words...
    that was a fun post =)

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  6. This is great! I loved reading his thoughts on the words...

    As soon as I saw "boff," I thought--doesn't that mean to have sex with somebody? So ... yeah. I would probably steer clear from that, just like "ejaculate" which CAN mean to say something loudly. LOL.

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  7. Chortle is one of those words that distracts me when I see it because no one uses it in real life. I also believed that "snicker" must be used with restraint.

    It's interesting that these words all have such specific connotations to me.

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Thanks for sharing your thoughts!