A
Rejection Letter That Started A Novel
No writer likes to receive a rejection letter. I
know I don’t. However, sometimes, rejections can be the beginning of something
good.
Originally, Champion
in the Darkness was a short story, entitled “The Choice.” I submitted it to
three different publications. I received three rejections.
Here’s a section from one of those rejection
letters:
“Overall
there wasn't much to the story. It was more of a section of a larger story. As
a reader, what would seem the truly interesting and conflict-filled parts would
be the training, and what was to follow the choosing of the sword. As a reader,
I suspect there is much more to this world the author has created, and this
slice wasn't enough to provide an adequate stand-alone story.”
I hadn’t thought of “The Choice” as part of a larger
story, but the phrase “what was to follow the choosing of the sword” stayed
with me, and I spent some time daydreaming about the characters and their
world, and eventually this became a series of short vignettes that seemed like
the beginning of a novel. However, I couldn’t seem to get it all to come
together. I waited for a while, wrote backstory, and then finally for NaNoWriMo
2010, I wrote The Crystal Sword, which I later renamed Champion in the Darkness.
A rejection letter started my novel.
So, to any writer that’s frustrated by rejection
letters, I want to encourage you not to look at the closed door, but to look
for the window of opportunity that’s open.
Have you ever received a rejection letter that
triggered an idea in your imagination?
Tyrean Martinson lives and writes in the Northwest, encouraged by her loving husband and daughters, and reminded to exercise by her dogs and cat. Champion in the Darkness is her first book in the Champion Trilogy, but she has previously published short stories and poetry. She can be found online at Tyrean’s Writing Spot.
Thank you, Tyrean! And now, let's take a look at her book, Champion in the Darkness!
Clara is younger than most trainees, but she is ready to hold a Sword Master's blade. While visions and ancient prophecies stand in her way, they also offer a destiny unlike any other. Clara is aided by a haunted mentor, Stelia, whose knowledge of their enemy Kalidess is both a bane and a blessing. As evil threatens their land, Clara and Stelia must find the strength to overcome the darkness!
Champion in the Darkness is YA Christian Fantasy and is the first book in the Champion Trilogy.
Where to find the book:
Champion in the Darkness on Amazon
Champion in the Darkness on Smashwords
Champion in the Darkness on Goodreads
Glad you didn't let those rejections get to you. And good that you got a helpful rejection. Those seem to be almost as rare as diamonds :)
ReplyDeleteNope. My rejections are more or less in the "It's not your story it's me" form. :-/
ReplyDeleteThe only idea rejection letters triggered was frustration. LOL. No, like Misha, most of my rejection letters were form. There were a few agencies that gave some feedback, but it was rare... very, very rare :) I'm glad that you rose above it, though! Well done.
ReplyDeleteWay to turn that rejection letter into a big positive!
ReplyDeleteT Drecker - helpful rejections are rare diamonds, but I'm thankful to have had few! Thanks for stopping by today!
ReplyDeleteMisha - Too bad, I hope that you get an acceptance soon!
Steven - I'm sorry to hear that. Most of mine have been form, but I have a better appreciation for the ones with feedback. Thanks!
Alex - It took me a while, but getting to see rejections like open windows helps me get through receiving them.
Laura - Thanks for hosting me today!
It was a blessing in disguise.
ReplyDeleteI love the positive energy that went into turning something negative about your story and making it something positive in the form of an entire novel!
ReplyDeleteDiane - Yes it was definitely a blessing in disguise!
ReplyDeleteJohanna - Thank you! It wasn't something that happened overnight but it built up over time. There are other stories that never went that direction, but with this one it seemed like there was something more.
You go girl. Love you
ReplyDeleteYes! A wonderful rejection letter turned the Backworlds from a short story into a series. Congrats Tyrean!
ReplyDeleteWaving at Laura!
Katie - Thanks! Hugs!
ReplyDeleteM Pax - So Craze got his start in a short story too, that's awesome!
Good for you. Wonderful that you turned a negative into a positive.
ReplyDeleteLove hearing stories like this! Way to let it light that fire and not put it out :)
ReplyDeletei am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteor
call/whatsapp:+2349057261346
i am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
or
call/whatsapp:+2349057261346
Make sure your posts are clear and concise. It is useful to have informative and detailed posts on your blog, but unnecessarily long ones will bore your readers. Those that read blogs aren't likely to appreciate a Shakespearian ability to describe the most mundane details of a setting. In other words, focus on the meat of the post, not the garnish.play bazaar
ReplyDeleteSmoking can have unfortunate effects on both the child and her baby. satta king
ReplyDeleteYour brain is like a muscle; you have to work out in order for it to stay agile. satta king
ReplyDeletesatta king
If you use a continuous positive airway pressure, or CPAP machine to treat your sleep apnea, sleep with it every night. When you take the mask off at night, your symptoms will return. Sometimes they might disappear for one or two nights, but then return. Wearing the mask every night prevents episodes of sleep apnea from occurring.satta king
ReplyDeleteplay bazaar
satta matka
If you consume alcohol or smoke, this could be the underlying cause of your sleep apnea symptoms. Meanwhile, smoking causes the swelling of the airways; alcohol does the complete opposite and relaxes them too much. If you want to be able to sleep well each night, limit or quit smoking and/or drinking.
ReplyDeletesatta king
play bazaar
satta matka