tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post7554971558962178517..comments2024-03-03T11:50:36.671-06:00Comments on <center>Laura Josephsen</center>: BlurbLaura Josephsenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04239501665574945313noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-350010508224702452011-07-11T13:17:28.574-05:002011-07-11T13:17:28.574-05:00This is fantastic. Love it!This is fantastic. Love it!Kate Avery Ellisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16639363051736890588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-15207161373467546192011-07-08T16:13:46.352-05:002011-07-08T16:13:46.352-05:00Barbara-Thanks! I'm still working on tweaking ...Barbara-Thanks! I'm still working on tweaking it.<br /><br />Jen-Thank you! ^_^<br /><br />Donna-Thanks!<br /><br />Alex-Good luck fine-tuning yours! I'm still working on this one.<br /><br />Donna W-Thank you sooo much! I might have to end up cutting that second turn of phrase, which makes me kind of sad, but I'm still working on fine-tuning that paragraph. <br /><br />Nia-:D :D Thanks!!<br /><br />Emmy-Thank you again for the thoughts. I'm working on trying to fine-tune one of the paragraphs and deciding what, if any of it, I want to change. I have about six different versions of it right now, LOL.Laura Josephsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04239501665574945313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-69394313514586272432011-07-08T11:09:43.560-05:002011-07-08T11:09:43.560-05:00I have to say, I like it but I think it gives away...I have to say, I like it but I think it gives away too much of the plot. If people know all that stuff at the beginning of the book, they won't feel Sephie's shock as she encounters each situation in turn.Emmy Roohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15790657453428942489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-8797337988226501912011-07-07T16:26:34.048-05:002011-07-07T16:26:34.048-05:00Love this! This sounds like such an original story...Love this! This sounds like such an original story. I want to read, like now.NiaRaiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13245742876021926812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-42299781262343093072011-07-07T15:09:52.927-05:002011-07-07T15:09:52.927-05:00I really enjoyed this. I love your turns of phrase...I really enjoyed this. I love your turns of phrase: "town the size of a tick" and "starring role in the local high school scandal."<br /><br />I'm ready to read it.Donna K. Weaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15763832177263927311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-41552168406068910682011-07-07T13:41:24.668-05:002011-07-07T13:41:24.668-05:00That's good. I need to fine-tune mine, and soo...That's good. I need to fine-tune mine, and soon!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-701578037724418192011-07-07T10:53:32.519-05:002011-07-07T10:53:32.519-05:00Sounds like a great read.Sounds like a great read.Donna Shieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04607270459657152401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-83767265687369951292011-07-07T10:34:44.313-05:002011-07-07T10:34:44.313-05:00Oooo, I like it!Oooo, I like it!Jennie Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331827076858223497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2028925612974754200.post-82678151368674658552011-07-07T10:02:59.676-05:002011-07-07T10:02:59.676-05:00Nice! Thanks for sharing...can't wait to see w...Nice! Thanks for sharing...can't wait to see what it's "really" about ;)Bklosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15445205221951596010noreply@blogger.com